Waiting

and i looked out

at the world

hoping rain

would come

and made love

to my soul

and I closed

the window

and turn on

the tv.

obama is smiling

at me.

rain, rain

i'm still waiting,

and so

are you

Anonymous said…

I like the simplicity of this poem, and how you nicely include Obama in it.

We are all waiting, aren't we?

Thanks for reading :) yup,we are all waiting,for some miracle or person.

salam, azriq.
nice poem. ringkas saja.
BTW, tahniah untuk cerpen di TC :)

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